Translate
Tuesday, 23 September 2014
Camping
One camping trip in Africa my five sisters Lucy, Isabella, Marcella, Maria, and Ave and then I Emilio went camping with the two national geographic people name Jim and Alex because we had no people over 18 traveling with us. We took I Jeep deep into the savannah where there wasn't a dirt road within 100km of us and we were 700km away from any civilization. We went this far so that Jim and Alex could get the best pictures of the animals. When we got out of the Jeep you could smell that very clean non populated air all we could smell is a little bit of animal feces. It was as hot as it could be it felt like my skin was on fire. As we started setting up camp you could hear all the animals around you. We set up two tents one for my sisters and I and one for Jim and Alex. As we finished setting up camp a male lion came wondering to our camp. Jim went towards him with the lion spray witch makes the lion run away in pain. Who know that lions where so defensive when Jim went to spray him than the lion suddenly ponced on Jim. The lion torn Jim apart and dragged his dead corpse away. Alex his wife went in her tent and started crying for the rest of the evening. So my sisters and I went in our tent for night. At about 1:00am the ground started to rumble which woke all of us up. We opened the tent door the there was a group of elephants was charging towards our tents. All my sisters starting screaming the elephants heard the screaming and thought it was mice so they avoided our tent, but the elephants ran over Alex's tent. The elephants also run into and over the jeep. Well by the end Alex was dead it was very sad, also we lost our only way out. We all got over all the bad that has happened. Once we ran out of food and we had live off the wilderness. A very nice group of lions took us into there pack and taught us their ways. We learned to hunt and find water out in the savanna. We lived like this for 3 years until we were found by our parents. It was a very emotional moment my parents were crying our new lion parents were crying. My sisters and I didn't know if we wanted to go or to stay.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
This was beautiful. Solid 10/10 because of how realistic it was. I could completely relate to your experience. A couple words seemed out of place but thats the only thing I can think of as an improvement.
ReplyDeleteemilio, my story was amazing
ReplyDeleteEmilio,
ReplyDeleteGood job, please ensure that you continue to proof read your work to avoid spelling or grammar mistakes. Have you actually been to Africa?